To Contemplate Mortality

     Life has its ups and downs
        its highs and lows
     Barren stretches
        endless plateaus 

     News of births bring renewal
        those of death give us pause
     to contemplate mortality and refuel
        of unequal length, the straws we draw
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Lawless Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 6:13 AM
too true, too true,
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:20 PM
That's 'too' straws for you, John. lol.
Bauer Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 5:22 AM
Very true and well said, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Thank you, Ilene. :) Gershon
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July 14, 2024 at 2:26 AM
Brilliant Poem my friend....so beautifully written!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Appreciate the enthusiasm, Deb.
Greenhough Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 10:02 PM
So true. I remember friends who died young. It seemed strange.
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