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To Come So Far

(for Carol)

Sun was shining and West African kora music playing
As I walked through your open front door
Smiling beauty in apron with dinner aromas wafting
Greeting as one old friend to another 
So newly met
Full to overflowing with expectation.

How long ago that winter’s day was
As vivid and fresh today
As the light and sounds, sights and smells
So indelibly impressed.

Now with the first of spring
Busying ourselves loading boxes
For another life-changing move,
Silently we each pray it is our last,
But know it won’t be
As time wears us down
And all the things that gave us meaning
Are replaced by something else.

Someday our hobbies and chores
Gardens and trees, pets, birds and bees
Like our aches and pains will prove too much
And we will retreat again
Seeking solace in ever more simplicity.

Until with senses and memory faded
We will be left 
With just the sights and sounds 
And the light that still lingers 
Through the door you so warmly opened
So long ago.

(3/20/26)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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March 21, 2026 at 8:41 AM
James a truly beautiful worded , calm, feel good write! I loved it...Debx
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March 21, 2026 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Deb!
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