To Celebrate My Life

Can you, O Lord,
Dim the sun a bit,
And brighten
the moon some?

Can you mix wine
in the seas a bit,
And add in the winds
fragrance some?

Can you splash colors
over the clouds a bit,
And add music
to the rains some?

Can you sling a swing
over the rainbow a bit,
And toss confetti
with the snow some?

I can then revel
in my life a bit,
And greet death
with smiles some!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Lovely thoughts Abdul, congratulations...
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 1:08 AM
I enjoyed the feeling of your poem brought about by words that your colorful imagery brought to life Abdul. Congratulations on your first placement! 7 ; )
Wood Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Nicely written Abdul! A well deserved "first place".
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