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To Broken Boat

To Broken Boat Whose land is lost, once more To sail again, is life to end So far outcast, the distant shore With lines untied, the tide a friend Whose hull, strengthened by years To waves, rocking a lullaby So worn, washed by tears The heavens weep, for why to cry Whose masts torn, to stop and think To Broken Boat, the sea adrift So holy the bilge, it knows not sink With time so short, this life a gift -Dakota Brockway

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:02:00 AM
Dakota Brockway, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:49:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2013 11:29:00 AM
Dakota, you enter proficient - thanks for sharing your poem with us at P-Soup. - Wish you a warm welcome and wish you luck. - Nice to read your poem, looking forward to reading more from you in the future. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:52:00 PM
Hi Dakota, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/9/2013 6:40:00 AM
A wonderful metaphore, boat to life. Love the stanza. Keep up the good work!
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