To Blind To See

you were hard to touch
i love you so much
 i was to blind
you made my life shine
you was untrue to me
i was
TO BLIND TO SEE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 29, 2012 at 3:06 PM
I understand where you as a poet is coming from in this poem.
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January 29, 2012 at 2:21 PM
great poem... I believe the proper use of TO, would be TOO.... but I always enjoy your poetry :) Short, to the point, and beautiful <3 Love, J.
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