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To Be With You

permeating filling the room musical waves charged with drama emotion melancholy desperation like a cloud that’s murky billowing rolling notes endlessly in a waltz meandering floating like a scent a perfume swaying and carrying me off to that ethereal dimension where our souls reunite connect intertwine and linger between worlds AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on December 12, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/12/2018 10:27:00 PM

Those last four lines are gold, dear one. Excellent poesy!! Bottle it and bask in it. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2018 10:28:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/12/2018 9:10:00 PM

"our souls connect and linger between worlds" Beautiful and intriguing

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/12/2018 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy. My inspiration for this one was music and being able, in spirit at least, to meet up with a loved one who has passed.