To Be With You

permeating filling the room
musical waves charged with drama
emotion melancholy desperation
like a cloud that’s murky

billowing rolling notes
endlessly in a waltz
meandering floating like
a scent a perfume
swaying and carrying me off

to that ethereal dimension
where our souls reunite
connect intertwine
and linger between worlds



AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 10:27 PM
Those last four lines are gold, dear one. Excellent poesy!! Bottle it and bask in it. ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:10 PM
"our souls connect and linger between worlds" Beautiful and intriguing
Gauthier Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy. My inspiration for this one was music and being able, in spirit at least, to meet up with a loved one who has passed.
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