To Be Seen

In the light of today
       The half-moon faintly stayed
              In the sky to see
           Like a treasure to be
     Found still shining, in the blue
To be seen by me, now passed onto you

Heidi Sands

12/8/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hauser  Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:39 PM
BEAUTIFUL!
Sands Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 12:51 PM
Thank you Mike! :)
Warrior Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Beautifully said, my friend...may the light of Christmas shine to your heart...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
Sands Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thank you so much WW. I hope you have a beautiful, peaceful Christmas :)
Michael Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Creativity in action...In the now...Wonderful...All the best Heidi
Sands Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Hi Arturo. Thank you very much :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 10:55 PM
This is wonderful Heidi :) xomo
Sands Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
May Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 5:42 PM
A lovely treasure...Nicely penned Heidi
Sands Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 5:43 PM
It was beautiful. Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:30 PM
And we have the moon! A scenic depiction--lovely thought.. to share the moon.
Sands Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Thanks Vijay, now you do! Straight from the skies here :)
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