To Be Seen

In the light of today The half-moon faintly stayed In the sky to see Like a treasure to be Found still shining, in the blue To be seen by me, now passed onto you Heidi Sands 12/8/17

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Mike Hauser

Date: 12/9/2017 12:39:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 12:51:00 PM

Thank you Mike! :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/9/2017 8:45:00 AM

Beautifully said, my friend...may the light of Christmas shine to your heart...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 8:58:00 AM

Thank you so much WW. I hope you have a beautiful, peaceful Christmas :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/9/2017 8:08:00 AM

Creativity in action...In the now...Wonderful...All the best Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 8:58:00 AM

Hi Arturo. Thank you very much :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/8/2017 10:55:00 PM

This is wonderful Heidi :) xomo

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/9/2017 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Maureen :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/8/2017 5:42:00 PM

A lovely treasure...Nicely penned Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 5:43:00 PM

It was beautiful. Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your visit and comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2017 4:30:00 PM

And we have the moon! A scenic depiction--lovely thought.. to share the moon.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/8/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks Vijay, now you do! Straight from the skies here :)