To Be Or Not To Be

She bled into a river
Where shallow water slept
Pored the essence from her soul
There with the leaves 
That autumn wept

As drop by drop she finally broke
The surface there below 
Broke through that murky river
Where her life began to flow

A stream of white upon a breast
Of dank and muddy water
Forgetting every moment
All the things that life had 
Taught her

Author:  Elaine Cecelia George
Written:  May 1st, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:44 PM
The leaves that autumn wept... really? that is SO romantic. I LOVE it - what a beautiful poem.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Well crafted Elaine.
Mhangwa Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Beautiful poem Elaine! I am glad to have discovered your work!
Daniel Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 12:28 AM
An excellent poem, Elaine:) long time since I read you:) you still captivate me with your words:)
Bilgic Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Yes,true
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 5:42 PM
Lainey....a lovely reflective piece...Autumn weeping into the river. Stunning imagery! I love this ! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 3:51 PM
Still waters run deep, and like you , beautiful, elaine!! So good to see this new poem of yours today.
Duet Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:16 PM
A sad poem but surely a good one, Elaine.
Parker Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 10:29 AM
A very well written poem that touches the readers emotions, leaving them wanting more
George   Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Frederic...and for your much appreciated comments. Elaine
Green Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Beautifully crafted Elaine. This was such a deep offering that I didn't want to end. This poem mesmerized me as I read it today. It is so nice to see you posting something new.
George   Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Chris...and for your very much appreciated comments. I...from time-to-time...take a break from computers and such in order to recharge my own battery...lol! Elaine
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