To Be Or Not To Be
I looked like plump Mrs. Potato Head before
Then I started dancing around the room
Then I danced around the large ballroom floor
Discarding my broom, I began to bloom
Then I started dancing around the room
My youthful figure began a sweet bud
Discarding my broom, I began to bloom
No longer was I a rustic fat spud
My youthful figure began a sweet bud
Then I danced around the large ballroom floor
No longer was I a rustic fat spud
I looked like plump Mrs. Potato Head before
Date: 07/27/2021
Photo: #3
I used rhyme zone
Contest: Pantoum Rhyme 1
Sponsor: Eve Roper
1I looked like plump Mrs. Potato Head before 10
2Then I started dancing around the room 10
3Then I danced around the large ballroom floor 10
4Discarding my broom, I began to bloom 10
5
6Then I started dancing around the room 10
7My youthful figure began a sweet bud 10
8Discarding my broom, I began to bloom 10
9No longer was I a rustic fat spud 10
10
11My youthful figure began a sweet bud 10
12Then I danced around the large ballroom floor 10
13No longer was I a rustic fat spud 10
14I looked like plump Mrs. Potato Head before 10
I did check this on syllable counter and this is what I got so that is the reason I did not correct it.
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