To Be In Love

To be in love along the rushing shore
And hear sounds from your heartbeat to enslave
To kiss your hungry lips, then wanting more
Obtaining love's desire, its constant crave
Besot, beneath this dazzled sky, I find
Love's lightning splays a light that clears my view
Such echoed worlds, warm soft as waves inclined
Submerged through quiet eyes, a love so true
My hand entwined in yours, we bond as one
While watching footprints fade in pebbled sand
To spy a reddening sky and setting sun
While falling into night, at stars command

We'll feel the waves upon our warmest skin
And touch the stars, as dawn arouses in

Written by Mystic Rose & Frederic Parker
                March 3, 2014
For contest, Collaboration.. sponsored by Jared Pickett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/5/2014 9:46:00 PM
hello Frederic, a wonderful collaboration, with one of the best poet on this site.......SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/5/2014 9:50:00 PM
thank you my friend...St Patty day with your pic?
Date: 3/5/2014 6:55:00 PM
Frederic and Beautiful Rose...this is absolutely flowing beautiful....:-) :-) :-) it's sure to be atop the winner list..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/5/2014 8:47:00 PM
thank you for your kindness
Date: 3/5/2014 6:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful picture of 'being in love' you two have painted in words, you both deserve to win. Tiaua
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Date: 3/5/2014 2:54:00 PM
thank you for your kindness
Date: 3/5/2014 4:14:00 AM
- Mystic Rose & Frederic know what it's like to be in love   ............. Beautifully written!! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/5/2014 2:55:00 PM
to you my poetic friend I say thank you, may your spirit stay forever gentle...Frederic
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