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To Be In Love

Keen to meet his pretty new girlfriend, He put on his best expensive shirt, He combed his long curls to recent trend, Well ironed trousers, no speck of dirt! Brushed perfect teeth to glistening white, Tested smile on mirror for effect, Hint of perfume, the blue tie just right, Who would deny youngster so perfect! Ushered into expensive hotel, He slowly looked for his lovely friend, Beside scented bouquet is his belle, Smiling she greeted him to her end, Dressed in crimson with embroidery, If love could personify, she is it, Her lips, her cheeks like some pink berry, Glowing emotion in room dim lit! God does not live in some unknown sphere, Do not look for Him in church or books, See God in the love of these two here, Their joys, their kisses, their divine looks! ‘A’ Lipogram poetry’ contest No letter ‘A‘ Sponsor Emile Pinet Written 26/08/2020 Checked at howmanysyllables. com (9 syllables except line 14 which has 10) Rhyme words checked at rhymezone.com

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Date: 8/29/2020 8:43:00 PM
Krish, a delightful rhyme and tale of love, all within the constraints of no letter 'A'! Very impressive... good luck in the contest and all the best to you ~ John
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/29/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thanks John. Delighted to hear from you. Much appreciate your visit.:)
Date: 8/27/2020 4:48:00 AM
Hi Kim....I see a trophy on thine mantelpiece. I felt as if I were there. Plus, loved your summation. Panagiota xxx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/27/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota! Lovely to have your feedback!! Hope all is well now in your area!
Date: 8/26/2020 5:04:00 PM
A beautiful love story. Not easy to do without using any A’s.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/27/2020 12:47:00 AM
Thanks Caren! Very pleased with your kind comments! Delighted you like it. Yes, a challenge to entirely omit a vowel!

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