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To Be Free

TO BE FREE flag flaps like a fresh sheet on a chilly Winter day red and white stripes like the sound of sails all fifty stars stay in place like battleships this grand old flag threaded with meaning sold as a freedom wannabe those stripes on frightened backs the same stars both could see for some resided level with their heads others had stars in their eyes like malignant scars the flag continued its lengthy voyage one day it had a dream striped red lips almost smiled at the thought we each look up at the stars and stripes patriotic flight we balance on its wings the wings of an eagle the American dream to be free 7/11/2017 free verse

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Date: 7/12/2017 5:31:00 PM
You expressed your patriotism w/passion, Kim. Well done. However, I must disagree w/Victor. He has forgotten the history of this land. When white people first arrived on these shores, they were the minority. Everything has a return. Such is the kismet of life. Nice poem though. Love always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2017 12:16:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie!
Date: 7/11/2017 6:55:00 PM
this is so good, Kim. Free verse the way I like to see it done!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 7:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 7/11/2017 1:58:00 PM
Lovely write Kim :) xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen! Xx
Date: 7/11/2017 1:24:00 PM
very cool write ... really like the way it looks and reads ... great message wrapoed in here ... Thanks for sharing your thoughts. ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 1:36:00 PM
Thanks so much :) branded stars
Date: 7/11/2017 12:54:00 PM
Your poetry always takes me to new places and I learn so much from you. This one is no exception to that...a great piece of writing Kim. Your imagination, your word play and your presentation are all out of the park. Wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2017 1:37:00 PM
How much I appreciate, you Chris! Thank you :)

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