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To Be Followed 1

On the rounded shells, Under the arches of the stars, On the children’s toys, I’m looking for it, On the deserts crossed, On the waves without fear, In the smiling gardens, I’m looking for it, In the shared silences, Under the dancing flags, In the dreams of birds, I’m looking for it, In the villages and their bell towers, On the caresses of the hills, In rhymes and emeralds, I’m looking for it, ( to be continued) Sur les coquillages arrondis, Sous les arcs des étoiles, Sur les jouets des enfants, Je le cherche, Sur les déserts traversés, Sur les vagues sans peur, Dans les jardins souriants, Je le cherche, Dans les silences partagés, Sous les drapeaux dansants, Dans les rêves des oiseaux, Je le cherche, Dans les villages et leurs clochers, Sur les caresses des coteaux, Dans les rimes et les émeraudes, Je le cherche, ( à suivre)

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Date: 10/18/2023 12:33:00 PM
Finally seeing part one of this set. When i have time, i'll try to see the rest!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/18/2023 4:13:00 PM
o sorry Andrea, if it is too long, jump ton number 5, you'll get the potical idea thanks for stopping by
Date: 10/10/2023 12:43:00 AM
Sounds really good!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 2:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Karen, for stopping by
Date: 10/9/2023 5:04:00 PM
A great beginning to what I know will be a wonderful poem.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 2:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jerry, for your support and reading
Date: 10/8/2023 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful yann. "Smiling gardens" and bird dreams. Truly poetic images... on to part 2. Thanks
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/10/2023 7:08:00 AM
I didn't make the Éluard connection yann, but thank you for letting me know this. I will reread your five poems in this series with that in mind
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Yann Rolland
Date: 10/10/2023 2:14:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jeff, i must admit i have ben influenced by surrealism ( specially Paul Eluard, "liberté j'écris ton nom), i modestly try to imit this grand poète, thanks a lot for the supportive comment

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