L Milton Hankins Poet Haibun

To Be Childlike

Somewhere along the way we lose our childlikeness. We must always keep in mind that Jesus said, “[Let] the little children come unto me, and forbid them not, for of such are the kingdom of heaven.” This makes me believe that we must inculcate the quality of childlikeness if we are going to be worthy of entering into the kingdom of God. Children pretend but are not pretentious. Children see life as it really is, not as they wish it could be. Children are happy with what they have, not greedy for more. Children know the meaning of unconditional love without being taught. 

Lord, to be childlike
to see You as life’s treasure
always seeking grace

SIXTH PLACE WINNER
Written June 5, 2022
Submitted to "Like a Child" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Regina McIntosh

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Eve Roper July 21, 2022 at 8:37 AM Children do know what love is and who do love them. Congratulations on your win my friend L Milton Hankins July 21, 2022 at 12:36 PM Thanks so much, Eve. Yes, I certainly believe they do.

Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2022 at 7:45 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Love your line, "Children know the meaning of unconditional love without being taught. ." So very true. Have a great/blessed day....................... L Milton Hankins July 21, 2022 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much, Paula. I really enjoyed writing for this contest.

Christuraj Alex July 21, 2022 at 3:55 AM "Children pretend but are not pretentious", "not greedy", "know the meaning of unconditional love without being taught" - Beautifully written. Congratulations! L Milton Hankins July 21, 2022 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much, Chris. I appreciate your thoughts.

Regina Mcintosh July 21, 2022 at 2:32 AM Love this, friend! An encouragement and a hope, lovely... Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina L Milton Hankins July 21, 2022 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much, Gina. I really enjoyed writing for your contest and extend my congratulations to all the winners.

Tom Cunningham June 6, 2022 at 1:38 AM Children are more switched on than we give them credit for. Good luck in the contest Milton. Tom L Milton Hankins June 6, 2022 at 8:03 AM I believe they are, Tom. They have a kind of innocence that is absolutely beautiful.

Caren Krutsinger June 6, 2022 at 12:03 AM yes, for sure, a marvelous answer to the prompt Hank. Good luck in the contest! L Milton Hankins June 6, 2022 at 8:03 AM Thank you so very much, Caren.

Vickey Rhymer June 5, 2022 at 11:27 AM Why ,what,,who, where,and when, their favorite words.Gotta love a kid and their little humble knowledge seeking minds.Enjoyed what you shared. L Milton Hankins June 5, 2022 at 11:35 AM Thank you so very much, Vickey. It is so nice to hear from you and to read your encouraging comment.