To Be Alone

No one sees you walking by
No one cares to you say hi
You feel alone, with not a soul
Accompanying you inside this hole

Your heart is clasped with a cold hard touch
From a society absent of this it is so much
It hurts so bad when no one sees you cry
To be your friend no one cared to try

Look this way and your soul to behold
That I am someone that has felt the cold
Of a society absent and no one cared to try
To lift me up, because nobody saw me cry

Dear lonely person with no one to hold
Come seek friendship from me it's not to bold
Sure I tend to shy from the crowd
But I will listen to your heart that speaks not so loud

I do not pretend to be someone I am not
So of a true friend you have confidently sought
Look no further I will always care to try
For I always will be here to carry you when its time to cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/21/2013 11:44:00 PM
wow a great read ...Seren
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Date: 11/28/2012 7:45:00 PM
You are a kind caring person and it shows! Light & Love
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 12/2/2012 10:49:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/23/2012 5:00:00 PM
Good piece of poetry my friend. Very nice. Michael
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 5:23:00 PM
Thank you Michael! It means alot!
Date: 10/23/2012 10:21:00 AM
Isolation and loneliness are described very well here... We feel our own when reading it.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 4:28:00 PM
I hope so, thank you for reading!
Date: 10/23/2012 7:38:00 AM
This brought tears to my eyes, It's really lovely.
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Jordan Dickinson
Date: 10/23/2012 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, it means a lot. Godspeed to you Stacey.
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