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09/25/24

16 lines or less on topic sentence.

Second place.

Contest by Miranda Hawley 

Don't ignore the stop sign on yellow school bus even if in hurry. All along discipline to carry ! Kids safety ! Priority. Whether cops are watching or not That's not the point al all : Got it ? Car drivers ! Keep alert : Right ! To disobey red light is crime offence. Car drivers ! Have common sense Both car and bus are put in danger. It's better late than never. Don't try to overtake : Traffic rules not to break Safe drive ! Save life. Be cautious : Not to behave notorious.

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Date: 9/29/2024 7:24:00 PM
I can simply hear this poem being "read" and it is cute, but true, the way you presented this message. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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