Notes About The Poem

09/25/24

16 lines or less on topic sentence.

Second place.

Contest by Miranda Hawley 

To All Cars

Don't  ignore  the stop sign
                                  on yellow school  bus even if in hurry.
                                   All along discipline to carry !
                                        Kids safety ! Priority.
                                    Whether cops are watching or not
                               That's not the point al all : Got it ?
                             Car drivers ! Keep alert : Right !

                              To disobey red light is crime offence.
                               Car drivers ! Have common sense 
                                  Both car and bus are put in danger.
                                  It's better late than never.
                                                      
                             Don't try to overtake : Traffic rules not to break
                               Safe drive ! Save life. 
                              Be cautious : Not to  behave notorious.
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September 29, 2024 at 7:24 PM
I can simply hear this poem being "read" and it is cute, but true, the way you presented this message. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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