To Age-To Live

To God pray to live Wish granted, old we become Grumbling never ends! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 August 2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2015 5:03:00 PM

You told me to see this one, and guess what? I had already seen it!!! haha I LIKES it.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/4/2015 6:12:00 PM

No, I told you to see, "My Age and I" ha-ha! Happy Birthday! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2015 1:02:00 PM

- Dear friend Demetrios, I know an old oak tree..... it should be about nine hundred years .... but neither the size or age prevents it impel new leaves every year :) - Well done !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2015 8:11:00 AM

Ha ha, aging is not for the weak of heart.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/25/2015 8:20:00 AM

God give as a gift: To live under the condition we get old. The majority of us accept the first and complain for the second. What will happen though if God observing our reluctance withholds his gift of living? Thank you my friend for taking the time to visit and comment!