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To a wasp

Oh dreaded parasitic predator, I yield to your flitting whim and unannounced intrusion. Innocently productive, you carry on your quest, unprovoked and unassuming. But for your merited renown, I take preemptive action testifying to my regard. The sport of a cautious hunt prompts instinct and evasion, no match for a well-aimed swat. And with your final writhing twitch I find a kind of sovereign triumph in my gleeful, gloating grin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/28/2018 7:23:00 AM
(: wow you summed up my childhood in this poem. I have seen so many back then. Such a delight to read this masterpiece. Grateful to read it too. Thanks for posting this poem on here. -JWE
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Date: 11/27/2013 1:10:00 AM
Thvia, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2013 2:28:00 PM
Hopefully you are referring to the insect variety or should us White Anglo Saxon Males be cocearned? Great Write either way, Ha Ha.
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:34:00 PM
They are a plague here in my state. We have a battle each spring, summer and fall !! I am allergic to their sting, so if I find a big nest, I call in my sweet younger brother !! And yes, I grin when I swat one too !! lol Enjoyed !!
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Date: 11/12/2010 6:38:00 PM
Thanks for the kind comments. I love this piece by the way. You paint a beautiful picture with your words and I am impressed! True Romantic poet lives in you as I read this piece of a wasp, I have no doubt that you are a true poet! WOW.
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Date: 11/11/2010 11:46:00 AM
Should I call this a new form: dramatic satire. It is efficiently wrought with genius and humor, reflected from the self. Thvia, my friend, I enjoyed the time I spent reading more of your work today, may God bless you.
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:31:00 AM
love it , allergic to the pesky devils so I relate to the gleeful gloating grin
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Date: 10/6/2010 1:33:00 PM
Poor wasp - but, he should have thought twice before messing with you. LOL Your poem put the same grin on my face as I imagine on yours having triumphed over this pest. I once had a severe allergic reaction to a wasp sting - so I applaud your "well-aimed swat". Death to the twat! Joe
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:40:00 PM
Woe! I just had a bang into my sunglasses about 30 min. ago!?! Providence! I wish I could have gotten that little bugger. Hope u had fun w/ u'r family!
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Date: 10/1/2010 2:10:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem. I was out on the deck this afternoon and a pesky wasp was bugging me. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:16:00 AM
What a wonderful flow of words with expressed inner thoughts, Thvia
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:07:00 PM
Well done, Thvia I enjoyed your second stanza. Innocently productive- yes a quest minding there own buisness. I would never dare to provoke such a predator. Enjoyed your poem. By the way i just saw your blog, i forgot to add you have lovely kids, wow! 5 I know the feeling.lol. Got 5 myself, And your hair color wow! OUTRAGEOUS" And your poetry awesome, enjoyed ,..p.d.
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Date: 9/30/2010 5:04:00 PM
Loved the last stanza there. I used to wait for the bumblebees to come to my little wading pool when I was a kid and then i"d drown them if they landed on the water. Payback for the times their family members had stung me. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:21:00 PM
Ah the satisfaction of swatting those pesky things is priceless, can relate to this as well but I save it for mosquitoes...enjoyed reading this one Thvia and happy to see you back :) I'm rushing out to get ready for school when I saw your wonderful comments-- thank you very much :) enjoy your day!-- see you! hugs --nikko :)
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