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To a Lonely Soul, Sad of Eyes

A grey, bleak sky surrounds, Leaves fall silently from branches. A young boy sits on a park bench, With nobody else around. A cold breeze blows past, The last straw of a lonely soul. The first tear falls from his eye, Followed by a waterfall of emotion. Behind his skin, a life story. One of pain and solitude. Nobody cares, he thinks. No, he locks it inside his heart. Sad of eyes watching the darkness. Watching, but never helping. Perhaps they don't want to help, Or does he deny his own misery. ---------------- I chose the title "To a Lonely Soul, Sad of Eyes" Date: 22 April 2020 Sponsor name: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/3/2020 1:09:00 PM
Awesome poem with wonderful imagery, Logan:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Logan Lester
Date: 5/3/2020 10:11:00 PM
Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it.
Date: 4/24/2020 4:57:00 PM
This was a great story of a lonely upset boy it was well written and felt
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Logan Lester
Date: 4/25/2020 2:37:00 AM
Thank you! I appreciate it :)

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