Tko

I could hear my heart
I could barely see
Didn’t know my part
Hazy memory
Finches in the bush

Flashes of light
Flock of macaw
Gaining eye sight
Molten lava

Sparkling
Soda pop
Fogged window

Relaxed
Vibrant

Ouch

By Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Interesting Diminished Hexaverse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Hilliker Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Good job, Robb. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
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