Greg Hoffman Poet Rhyme

Titles

This relationship is a 'losing proposition',you know it to be true
While I finally have the courage,' I'm breaking up with you'
The 'rearview mirror' is not the way we want to live our life
Sorry but I have to say I can't make you my wife
We will not suffer for years,because of 'one days magic'
That would be reprehensible, and very tragic
Let's be truthful with each other and stop playing these head games
You know our hearts have been burned, by the heat of 'different flames' 


Contest: Titles
Sponsored by: Pendleton Arkwright
Written 8/31/2015

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Janice Canerdy September 22, 2015 at 6:07 PM Well done, Greg! Your concise poem clearly conveys the theme: Sometimes a romance just isn't working! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2015 at 8:22 AM - A great poem, fits the contest - Good luck, Greg - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Greg Hoffman September 5, 2015 at 8:50 PM Thank you for stopping by and commenting Anne-Lose,it's very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2015 at 12:46 AM hey you did a good job with your titles. Mine are XMAS poems. Good grief. But one if not, so I don't know how the heck I will be fitting it in. haha Greg Hoffman September 5, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thanks for commenting Andrea, I'm sure with your talent you will enter a winner.