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This relationship is a 'losing proposition',you know it to be true While I finally have the courage,' I'm breaking up with you' The 'rearview mirror' is not the way we want to live our life Sorry but I have to say I can't make you my wife We will not suffer for years,because of 'one days magic' That would be reprehensible, and very tragic Let's be truthful with each other and stop playing these head games You know our hearts have been burned, by the heat of 'different flames' Contest: Titles Sponsored by: Pendleton Arkwright Written 8/31/2015

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/22/2015 6:07:00 PM

Well done, Greg! Your concise poem clearly conveys the theme: Sometimes a romance just isn't working! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2015 8:22:00 AM

- A great poem, fits the contest - Good luck, Greg - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/5/2015 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by and commenting Anne-Lose,it's very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2015 12:46:00 AM

hey you did a good job with your titles. Mine are XMAS poems. Good grief. But one if not, so I don't know how the heck I will be fitting it in. haha

Greg Hoffman
Date: 9/5/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thanks for commenting Andrea, I'm sure with your talent you will enter a winner.