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A child cries alone in the darkness-
                      
                                                    a mother dances in the sunshine

familypeoplesadmonoku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Christi. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 3:31 AM

Sad, but excellent writing, Christi! (As usual.) Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 8, 2010 at 8:12 PM

Congrats on the win

Margaret Foster

May 6, 2010 at 12:21 AM

congratulations on your placing Christi. this tugs at the heartstrings...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2010 at 3:18 PM

wow, this one is very interesting and sad. . . LUv, Andrea

May 5, 2010 at 8:05 AM

What a contrast--so sad it is too often the truth. Powerful poem. Congratulations on placing second in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Wishing you many more. Karen