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TITANIC OVERTURES

Chinrest in place I begin to play my violin and the whole world disappears.... an appassionato moment of pure delight, among the chaos of a swallowing ocean ! Dreams I never dared dream pour out like blood, at the cusp of a massive drowning; Titanic of 1912, a collision of magnitude proportion between ice and steel, the thrum of dying bodies pummeling down into the sea. She was beautiful, a broken fire in the middle of the Adriatic Sea... He a Jack of the arts a poor man with a lucky card then there was J Bruce Ismay, a coward with a license to preach, a self appointed God, who placed greed in front of life and progress...
I play on, " Nearer, My God, to Thee" my music becomes my last will and testament, as my feet sink and my soul leaves my body I play for the God who saves, I play for the drowning victims, and I play for the sea, that taketh me

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Date: 1/17/2024 2:54:00 PM
Thx so much for your unique contribution to the contest. Yours was the only one to use the perspective of one of the players. Excellent
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:03:00 PM
I enjoyed your contest very much thanks for your placement, Vie
Date: 1/15/2024 6:23:00 AM
Playing the violin while the ship sinks shows the resignation to fate, Very nicely penned Vie
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:03:00 PM
Thanks for reading Joseph
Date: 1/15/2024 4:40:00 AM
So beautiful, Rose. Love this so. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/17/2024 7:03:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Regina, blessings
Date: 1/15/2024 1:50:00 AM
Ah, Rose. It is always a pity to read about these disasters. Aptly done.
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Date: 1/15/2024 4:11:00 AM
Yes it was Victor what a sad plight for them all. I haven't watched that movie in a while, I think I might give it a go again, with a box of kleenex beside me, lol
Date: 1/14/2024 4:21:00 PM
a fantastic contest entry, Rose...I liked how you used the violin player as the one revealing the tragic events of the sinking of the Titanic. I found these words captivating and powerful: Titanic of 1912, a collision of magnitude proportion between ice and steel, the thrum of dying bodies pummeling down into the sea. I especially liked the violinist's words at the end...kind of took my breath away. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 1/14/2024 5:14:00 PM
I have always had an affinity for the violin Sara, and the movie still remains til' this day one of my favorites, thanks for reading and commenting dear friend
Date: 1/14/2024 3:13:00 PM
I find it heroic the men that played while the ship was sinking. It wasn't just jack and Rose it was all that can read music and play brought into the movie.
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Date: 1/14/2024 5:13:00 PM
Brave they were all of them, definitely a memorable movie to remember forever S, thanks for reading
Date: 1/14/2024 1:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed your take on this theme...Best of luck in your contest..
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Date: 1/14/2024 5:12:00 PM
Thank you Silent One been a while I haven't seen the movie, maybe its time for a re visit
Date: 1/14/2024 6:08:00 AM
I play on, " Nearer, My God, to Thee" my music becomes my last will and testament, as my feet sink and my soul leaves my body--I hear the turmoil of the final goodbye. Aptly done, Vienna.
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Date: 1/14/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thanks you for reading it blessed Sunday to you, :)

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