Titanic Letters Contest

I write this poem from my heart
As I set off on my fresh new start
A woman of the age of nineteen
Leaving her family for this American dream
With just this napkin and worn out ink
I rest this night under Gods eyes and think
Of all that I am leaving behind
To make sure my little boy and I will be just fine
The ticket cost more than we could afford
But while the captain said "all aboard"
I knew it was my last chance to truly live
And have a chance to someday give
These little hands the ability to play
Lord give us strength is what I pray
From nine to two im committed to dine
On deck with musical fingers that chime
Then again at six for dinner time
Seriate this ship while they enjoy evening wine
Though they will make money off me
My only song and melody
Will sound across the ocean floor
Free at last my wings shall finally soar
And when he’s older he will understand
A mother’s love and faithful hands
Directed his destiny to new borders
While voyaging on still waters
When he’s grown he will know no lack
For all his wealth will be in tact
I end this write until part two
My payment now I must pursue,
Day three on this exquisite sea
The people have been quite nice to me
They house me and my angel all for free
While I keep playing so eloquently
I know we will soon be there
A man offered us to stay in his care
All if I will teach his wife
To dance on zebra keys with abundent life
The lavish life I can plainly see
Never again will we feel pity,
Why are people screaming upstairs?
Ill finish my line for down here I’m unaware
This poem I keep sown in his pocket
For my son you will look back and it will be your cherished locket...

I sit here and look at all my land,
I wish for a moment I was still in your hands,
Dear mother you sacrificed your life for me,
That night our ship of dreams lost its identity,
Now grown and wise,
With your gental green eyes,
This piece of you is all I got,
As I write, my stomach is in knots,
Even though I was only two,
I remember all that you went through,
Wrapping me in a little tote,
Slipping me in that safety boat,
For many had to stay on deck,
While the ocean engulfed that wreck,
And only the rich could really survive,
Dear mother I was your wealth that’s how you kept me alive,
You have never left my sleeves,
I keep your words sown as part of me,
I know that you’re playing For God and all his angelic bliss
I end this journal entry with a cherished kiss.

By; Sabina Nicole
Titanic contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/11/2012 1:49:00 PM
congrats Sabina on a fabulous write and win for the Titanic contest theme luv..
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/13/2012 9:13:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/11/2012 9:43:00 AM
Sabina congrats on your win,epic..David
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/11/2012 11:46:00 AM
Thank you David!!!
Date: 4/11/2012 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/11/2012 11:46:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/11/2012 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sabina this is beautiful xx
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 4/11/2012 5:40:00 AM
thank you veryyyyy much:) enjoy your week<3
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