Don Johnson Poet Ballad

Titanic Blue

ups n downs,
 for the rich an the clowns, 
the great leveler, 
blue grey sea water, 
consternation, 
brought on the frowns, 
death dog-paddled,
 there in the water:(

thanks Russell Sivey

Titanic,

Don

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Robert Pettit April 2, 2012 at 11:12 PM There was no distinction between rich and poor when the ship started sinking. After that, it was all a matter of individual survival. Good write Don.

Kim Merryman March 29, 2012 at 7:24 AM I enjoyed reading your poem, Don. Excellent descriptive language. Love, Kim

Jancarl Campi March 29, 2012 at 2:41 AM A nice poem. I am a little interested in the Titanic. It is a shame that the chances taken sunk an unsinkable ship.

Len Gasun March 29, 2012 at 2:19 AM Nice poem! It reminds me of the titanic movie. thanks for sharing,Don.