Titanic

With a big gash on her side still no one thought she'd sink
In wanting to enjoy the ride such things they didn't think
The alarms had been sounded with lifeboats at the ready 
Yet thinking it was unfounded as the boat remained steady

The crew began calling out for everyone to enter a craft
But most of them still had doubt as some even laughed
Again and again they tried to save even just one more
They all stood side by side not knowing what's in store

Time after time, chance after chance they chose to stay
Committed to that stance even up to their very last day
As the ship now tilted many then soon began to realize
Like a blossom that had wilted from a deckhands' eyes 

As if in calling out to you, somehow someway you'd see
All these alarms are true even if you yourself don't agree
You felt and heard that noise surely everything isn't right
As yet another lifeboat deploys drifting off into the Light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Great thoughts on the need to be saved expressed beautifully through the Titanic ship:)
Flannery Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 5:42 AM
Yes if people actually knew His Truth they too would be getting people into "lifeboats".For God provided lifevoats for everyone. But people need help boarding sometimes. We are Gods deckhands. God Bless Jo Daniel. God Bless us all.
Hester  Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Beautiful and very inspiring
Flannery Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Savannah for your kind comment. Have a wonderful day.
Allison Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Great descriptive write of the final moments of the great ship - I visited the Titanic exhibition in Belfast - the story of the voyage will never be forgotten:-) hugs Jan xx
Flannery Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Thank you Jan. Eventually, we all end up needing to be saved. If Only They would have been more prepared and everyone was saved. God Bless them all, but us also. Take care Jan!
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