Titanic

Engulfed by gigantic sea waves,
Experienced oceanic abyss,
Blessed !!



Dixdeux O, syllables 10/10/2
On pic #1
Written June 2013
Awarded 8th place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 7:12 PM
A brave thought and start I would have loved to see a string with Blessed as the refrain. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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June 11, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Congrats on a nice win. BG
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