Titanic

They hailed her as the empress of the waves
Supreme upon the ocean’s vast domain,
Yet those who watched her launch, and bid ‘Godspeed’,
Could never have foreseen her fleeting reign.

She left Southampton heading for New York;
The sky above was somewhat overcast.
Such hopes and dreams were riding on her bow,
But this first voyage proved to be her last.

The pinnacle of luxury and ease
Awaited wealthy passengers on board,
Whilst crystal chandeliers to music swayed,
A toast to life was raised and champagne poured.

On lower decks the entertainment lacked
Yet children made the most of little space.
Locked heavy gates were purposed to divide
And keep the third-class steerage in their place.

But when disaster struck the glacial path
And frozen waters threatened souls of men,
Proud opulence and rank would count as naught;
Humanity was equal once again.

25/03/19

 Titanic - Fare Thee Well Poetry Contest
Sponsor : Tom Woody
'2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 27' : sponsored by Mark Toney

A Noteworthy Ship Poetry Contest : sponsored by Robert James Liguori
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Liguori Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 11:23 AM
A titanic tail, so beautifully captured. Thank you for sharing your wonderful art.
Agustin Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality in your awesome poetic way. Indeed, "Proud opulence and rank would count as naught; Humanity was equal once again." God bless you.
Cunningham Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Congrats Wendy, the tragic story fascinates me, I could see all the finery in 1st class and the basic accommodation in steerage, I wrote one a while back R. M. S. Titanic, love history and writing poetry on it. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Chiri Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 2:02 AM
Wendy congrats on your HM!;)
Sergi Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Congratulations, Wendy: I love the way you spun this historic story in such a poetic vein!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Congrats on being #8 in the top 100 new poems!
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2019 at 4:05 PM
The was beautifully orchestrated, Wendy you have talent ......loved it
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Nicely done, Wendy, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and comment,Eve.
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 6:01 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Wendy! EXCELLENT! Janice
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:08 PM
I really appreciate your kind comment,Janice.
Toney Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 3:10 PM
Wendy, you poetically captured the tragedy that is "Titanic" in both the sinking and the class distinction that resulted in even more lives loss. Congratulations on your win on Mile 27 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Your support of my contest has contributed to its success, and for that I am very grateful. ~Mark
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 3:07 PM
I'm really pleased to have placed in your last contest Mark and thank you for the incredible amount of time which you've invested into this marathon challenge.
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 8:04 AM
A poignant but expressive poem on a 1912 disaster.ranoiar I think about t every time I'm on a ship. Parania will destroy ya!
Watson Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting,Ralph.
Cunningham Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Well written Wendy on one of the worst maritime disasters of all time. Tom.
Watson Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 5:19 AM
Thank you for your kind comment,Tom. I have recently been watching old footage of survivors which prompted me to write this.
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