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Written on December 18, 2023

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Steaming, a cup in hand Piping hot liquid, deliciousness Found on the heavy blend, Sunlight reflections on the glass, Window pane glistening, With its gentle brilliance. Steaming, one cupful of enjoyment, Pleasant like the morning, When the dew drips quietly, Shimmering on the edges of a rose, Blushing, shy – like the sunrise Who beckons from the mountain crests, Portraying the wonder of a dawn When light penetrates Forests and thickets with blessings. Steaming, a cup in hand Promising to share the moments, Just before darkness abandons the night, Wistful and whimsical as daybreak, When the joy of morning begins, And light seeps through the shadows, Pouring hope into the carefully laid plans. Steaming, one cupful of love, Breathless and flowing – singing Rhythmic as the new dawn, Enjoyed by those who know this love – Coffee is like the silence, Who prepares hearts for the time, Passing us by… the moments, Treasures we can’t keep but still, We won’t weep, because these treasures…. They are the fortunes found in memories – And those memories… jewels we keep!

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Date: 12/19/2023 3:40:00 AM
Oh wow, an exquisite poem this is, dear Gina.. I'm absolutely enchanted by the profound thought weaving a tapestry of emotions and memories, within a cupful of enjoyment, love, contentment and nostalgia. Those descriptions are absolutely eloquent and breathtaking where you've written "Shimmering on the edges of a rose, Blushing, shy – like the sunrise Who beckons from the mountain crests", "Coffee is like the silence, Who prepares hearts for the time" So beautifully done! :)
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Date: 12/18/2023 12:51:00 PM
Your poem is a delightful journey through the experience of cup of steaming coffee, beautifully comparing with the magic of dawn... The descriptions of the sunlight on the glass and the window pane glistening add a touch of elegance to the scene. The comparisons to the morning dew, the blushing rose, and the shy sunrise are wonderfully evocative.. Your words weave a tapestry of warmth and love, making that cup of coffee not just a beverage but a companion in the moments just before darkness..
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Date: 12/18/2023 9:07:00 AM
Never acquired a taste for coffee, but your poetry is addictive, my friend. Have a blessed day.
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