'tis Light Till Ten

The longest day
hath come and gone
each day will now get shorter
I love these sunny evenings
to lose them truly breaks my heart
for me I cannot bear the dark

‘Tis light till ten
A fox I spy
coming from his den
Baby birds are in their nest 
though anxious
to explore
Flap their wings
they try to fly
Too soon for them
I’m sure

As the sun goes slowly down
The sky ’tis brightest red
So beautifully exquisite 
in shades 
of red of pink of blue
always different
each night new
Before the moon
doth shine her light
a crescent moon tonight
My favourite moon
this moon I love
but soon 
it will be dark at 4
Alone in doors
forevermore
Four dark months
I cannot bear
Where is the sun
Please take me there
Maybe for me 
if not too late
I’ll shut my eyes
I’ll hibernate…

Written June 2023

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1225'
Sponsor Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/25/2023 4:57:00 AM
what exquisite imagery Ann, I love the longer days, can get to see so much more and even do a bit in the garden when the heat of the sun has gone:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 6/25/2023 10:14:00 AM
Bless you Jan, the thought of the days getting shorter makes me quite depressed, but I must make the most of the time we have and this glorious sunshine makes it even better. Thank you for your lovely words dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann
Date: 6/24/2023 4:12:00 AM
Awesome writing. I love this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/24/2023 8:10:00 AM
Dear Gina, how lovely to hear from you and thank you so much for your encouraging words. Delighted that you love my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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