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There are far too many great poets and poetess to pick just one...so I choose myself (lol)

Tis I

ne'er whilst ere, nor aft, I deem a trolley soul...tis I, I adore 


Who Flips Your Trolley Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Bobby May 
12/30/2019

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Constance La France

January 26, 2020 at 11:11 PM

Charlie, great tribute to "you".. funny, and congrats on your win in the contest _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

January 26, 2020 at 3:45 PM

hahaha, LOVE how you did this!! and in the rhyme too. Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM

- Congratulations With Your Winner Poem : " In Who Flips Your Trolley Contest", Charlie :) - Great Line :) - Regards // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

January 26, 2020 at 9:34 AM

Glad to see this one on the winners list. Congrats.

Kai Michael Neumann

January 18, 2020 at 3:09 AM

Wonderful. Nice take on the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

January 4, 2020 at 9:02 AM

A clever unique write, best wishes for the contest my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Indiana Shaw

January 3, 2020 at 8:30 PM

If you can't love yourself, who can you love . . . : )

Brandy Nicole

January 1, 2020 at 10:08 PM

Have you heard that Country song? "I Wanna Talk About Me" by Toby Keith. Your poem reminds me of his words. This is cute, clever and creative. "So You" :) Happy New Year Charlie. Like your Avatar, by the way. :) Brandy

Jenish Somadas

December 31, 2019 at 10:36 PM

lol.. That is the truth.. The person we love most is our self.. Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year..

Carolyn Devonshire

December 31, 2019 at 10:31 AM

:) Charlie, I'm not familiar with the contest but your monoku is exceptional! What a great subject. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Hope it's not too chilly in your area to celebrate New Year's tonight. Hugs, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux

December 31, 2019 at 9:39 AM

Ha ha, I like it, a bold choice. I commend you on your excellent taste.

Kim Rodrigues

December 31, 2019 at 8:02 AM

LOL...Charles! Kind of like Charles Winchester (of tv show Mash fame) ;)

Harry Horsman

December 31, 2019 at 12:09 AM

To be truthful to one's self, is the best recipe of all, love this, Happy New Year,

Alexis Y.

December 30, 2019 at 11:07 PM

Lol! Charlie, You chose well. I think Bobby will love this. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy New year my friend:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

December 30, 2019 at 9:13 PM

I like that you picked yourself, I didn't think of that :) anyway, a very good Monoku for Bobby's contest. Good luck! Oh, and I like the avatar.

Charles Messina

December 30, 2019 at 9:20 PM

I thought I would use some originality (lol) Thank you so much, Eve. Thank you also for liking my new avatar, it was time for a change. Have a Healthy and Happy New Year my friend. Charlie