Janice Canerdy Poet Rhyme

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April 29, 2024, placed 2nd in Andrea Dietrich's Andaree Me Again contest

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TIRED--Andaree

Extreme cleaning my house is wearing me out,
but I’ll get through. There can be no doubt. 
Straining and scrubbing’s required.
Buckets, I’ve perspired.
I’m beyond
tired.
Though not fond
of being this mired
in hard labor, I aspired
to cleanliness. When I’m through, I’ll shout.
Extreme cleaning my house is wearing me out.

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Joseph May May 1, 2024 at 5:37 AM Once the job is done you can shout, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win Janice Canerdy May 1, 2024 at 10:02 PM Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2024 at 8:34 AM I really relate to this one, Janice congrats on an awesome win Janice Canerdy April 29, 2024 at 6:22 PM Andrea, thanks SO much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice

Paul Bell April 24, 2024 at 6:05 AM I take it spring has sprung. Maybe a coat of paint to finish it off. Janice Canerdy April 24, 2024 at 6:54 AM Oh, yes. I got someone else to do the painting. Thanks, Paul. Janice