Tired While Retired

When younger, I would stay up late
And drink a lot of wine,
But nowadays, with half a beer,
I hit the hay at nine.

My teaching days, once filled with work,
Plus quite a long commute,
Would wipe me out for reasons that
Nobody would dispute.

Yet, now retired, I walk three miles
And pass the extra time
With reading, crosswords, phone calls
And, of course, my daily rhyme.

Though in the afternoon, I feel
Exhausted, truth be told,
Except that now, my main excuse
Is that I’ve gotten old.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 6:58 PM
Your last stanza although I hate to admit it, sounds familiar. I feel your pain. Thank goodness for crosswords and of course Poetry Soup. As a retired kindergarten teacher I love a good nap..don't tell. That and my age are a secret. :) I could read your poems all day!
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:06 PM
Your words are echoing in my brain's chamber, Ilene. Sigh. ~ O.M.G. = Old Man Gershon
Brotherton Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 1:55 PM
When I first retired, people told me I would hate it. If I had a robot body and flying cars like they promised me, I think retirement would be heaven.
Slaughter Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 10:58 AM
...and better, too, Ilene.
Rolland Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 2:25 AM
such a lovely poem, and touching, i can relate that teaching is a tough one, now you can enjoy your time as pleasure, and write beautiful poetry, thanks to you Ilene,
Turner Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 4:19 PM
...but living loud! I love it, Ilene, from one old rhymer to another:)
Borke Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Really, if not for an aging body, retirement is when life can finally be enjoyable
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