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Tired squire

Angel of fire, followed by faithful right hand, the squire of no desire, he's lonely, old and tired, but his war is a death sentence from over, years made him bolder, while also much colder, a crack away from snap, snap away from burst, stomach hurts, tear and squirts out the insides, no one knows where he went but he can't hide, angel thinks "he's mine", but without his mind, which she took, he's blind, goin down a road no one can find, sad really, it's kinda silly, his thoughts are many but acts are few, just wants to sit in the morning fog and dew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 8/1/2013 10:28:00 AM
Congratulation on being featured. Excellent poetry poet.
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:38:00 PM
AUSTIN, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:06:00 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:26:00 PM
Hi Austin, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:27:00 AM
Austin, -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/8/2013 9:14:00 AM
Welcome to the soup! Nice image this poem paints!- Edward
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Date: 7/8/2013 4:29:00 AM
- Hello Austin - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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