Tired Soul

Tired Soul

In the morning light, my bones feel heavy,  
Each breath is a whisper, a plea to be free.  
The sun spills gold, but I see only gray,  
A weary heart trudging through another day.

Coffee steams, but it offers no cheer,  
The weight of my thoughts is all I can hear.  
Dishes pile high, a mountain of dread,  
Each task a reminder of what’s left unsaid.

I shuffle through shadows, I wear my dull skin,  
A smile’s just a mask for the turmoil within.  
Time drips like honey, too thick to escape,  
I’m caught in a cycle, a worn-out landscape.

Even the laughter of friends feels like rain,  
It washes over me, but I’m lost in the pain.  
I nod and I smile, but inside I’m a ghost,  
A flicker of warmth that I miss the most.

The night wraps around me, a blanket of sighs,  
I lie in silence, where hope slowly dies.  
Each star feels so distant, a flicker of light,  
Yet here in my darkness, I’m losing the fight.

Oh, to feel vibrant, to dance with the sun,  
But the spark has faded, the battle’s not won.  
I long for the moments when joy felt alive,  
Now I’m just surviving, not sure how to thrive.

So I whispered a prayer to the universe wide,  
For strength in my bones, for peace deep inside.  
But tonight I am tired, my soul wears thin,  
A weary wanderer, where dreams have 
grown dim.

KM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/12/2025 6:50:00 AM
Very well articulated, thank you for sharing
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Date: 3/2/2025 7:03:00 PM
Dear Kimberlee, your use of imagery and metaphor is evocative and emotive. A rich, soulful display of your poetic gift. Congratulations for your success in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/1/2025 10:16:00 AM
Such relatable emotions and thoughts... unfortunately. You've captured this so vividly as if you were inside my head and the mind of many others in sure. Sometimes it brings consolation to know your not alone. And hope is not lost for you've provided the way out in your final stanza, "So I whispered a prayer to the universe wide, For strength in my bones, for peace deep inside." I am' faving' this work of heart... so glad I was able to read it! Xoxo
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Date: 2/22/2025 12:35:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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