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- Tired of Mice -

~  I'm too old to catch mice - sleep closes sorrow glance  ~









23.02.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Bavington  Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Nah. This one just looks real tired.
Dome Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Wonderful. So clever, love the pic. well done. X
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:25 PM
- Peter, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 11:43 AM
You always pick out your pics so perfectly to match your poem. I love this old owl, but he does seems that he has had a hard night and far past his bedtime! Wonderfully penned dear soul sister, blessings and love, Jenny.
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 1:13 PM
- Yes, she is tired ... hard to be awake all night, dear Jenny :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Neumann Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Never too old ...
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:41 AM
- The owl lacks sleep, Kai ... work all night seven days a week :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Love your monoku Anne-Lise...and the tried owl lol...all the best my friend...The Wingster...^WW^ :o)
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:37 AM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 8:48 PM
lol...i feel that way almost every morning...but i get up at 4 30 am...in bed soon... love the photo and your words! they go well together... hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:37 AM
- You start your day early, Sandra ... up at 4:30 am ... then most people sleep :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 7:51 PM
What once was fun, took flight and won, now sinks in sleepy lids...tired, so tired.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:35 AM
- A hard night for an old owl, Kim :) - Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Anne-Lise, poor thing looks like he had a heavy night. I know that feeling. I've survived a few "heavy" nights. lol very funny:)
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:34 AM
- An old owl needs some beauty sleep, Daniel :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, your poem is cute. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:31 AM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 5:53 PM
A nice juicy bunny would be easier seen, good one Anne-Lise...
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:31 AM
- A juicy bunny would have been something ... a meal for a king, Charlie :) - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Shame that as we get older tasks we used to do with ease become impossible. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:27 AM
- Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 2:34 PM
oh so cute a poem and pic!:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:27 AM
- Mice are good food for owls, Jan ... but we don't want them in our soup - Many thanks for the friendly visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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