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Tired Iron Horse

Tons of rolling iron Clip-clop down a wooden track The iron horse is worn. A powerful rolling beast has its share of bad days, too.

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Matthew Anish

Date: 8/31/2014 11:17:00 PM

Do you think a train has bad days like people do? This poems reminds me of Canadian Railroad Trilogy by Gordon Lightfoot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2014 11:27:00 AM

Ha! Not quite like ours, but it has aged. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 4:58:00 PM

Cool idea. Is this the trojan horse?

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/1/2014 11:27:00 AM

Most likely, not. Thanks for reading and commenting.