Tired and Limp

I am so drained, a tired mind, melted into goo upon a platter. Limp butter-soaked biscuit, no longer warm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 5:09 PM
I like this one, ML. It has it's own fascination. Panagiota
Kiser Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:34 PM
Haha, thanks much.
Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:34 PM
I know this is not supposed to be funny, or at least I think it's not--- but I found your goo and your biscuit to be such refreshing images for a tired and drained brain, so serendipitous! ~ Delighted in Chicago
Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:23 PM
Thanks Gershon, I wrote it one night when I couldn't get to sleep and was too tired to fight it anymore.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser, a cold biscuit will not melt the butter. Have a nice day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 7:24 PM
It get's cold if you put the butter on the biscuit and are too tired to eat it. Thanks.
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