Tired and Limp

I am so drained, a tired mind, melted into goo upon a platter. Limp butter-soaked biscuit, no longer warm.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/5/2019 5:09:00 PM

I like this one, ML. It has it's own fascination. Panagiota

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/6/2019 11:34:00 PM

Haha, thanks much.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/26/2019 1:34:00 PM

I know this is not supposed to be funny, or at least I think it's not--- but I found your goo and your biscuit to be such refreshing images for a tired and drained brain, so serendipitous! ~ Delighted in Chicago

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/27/2019 7:23:00 PM

Thanks Gershon, I wrote it one night when I couldn't get to sleep and was too tired to fight it anymore.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/26/2019 1:16:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser, a cold biscuit will not melt the butter. Have a nice day my friend.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/27/2019 7:24:00 PM

It get's cold if you put the butter on the biscuit and are too tired to eat it. Thanks.