Tired

TIRED


The bus sways from side to side on anonymous  bends 
Driver calls out stops and people shuffle off or on,
Not interested in the journey; but glad to be homebound.

Women with shopping bags look 
Fat and tired of holding up their own weight.
Men are stoop shouldered and overcrowded in the aisles,

Waiting for  their stops, cigarette in lips ready for lighting,
Turning up collars to get off and grab an elevator 
And flop on a couch with a coffee. 

I am too tired to look where the bus is going:
Flashing supermarket sign sweeps in and out of my misty pane
And then a filling station with lines of cars almost out of gas.   

Bright traffic passes the night-darkened window fogged
With the breaths of  sighing worn out passengers.
The seats creak with their overload of people.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/22/2018 6:59:00 PM
Hey is this new. I decided to click on poems of poets I followed and yours was one of the first to come up. Long time no see. I enjoyed your little poem.
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Date: 10/23/2018 6:20:00 AM
Andrea.....hello long time no hear Actually the poem was mishandled by the weak software which the Soup uses. I have resubmitted it now( same title) and I hope it appears as I wrote it hahaha Maybe you might like to re-read it now? I hope all is well with you and your family.....all my best wishes....Syd
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