Tipsy Turvy Nights

Toddling stumbling fumbling tumbling are some nights,like toddling stumbling child, tipsy turvy fumbling tumbling mind. © kashinath karmakar(17th August 2011) ===============000============== Placement:7th;(August 2011) Contest:Tyburn Sponsor:Dr.Ram Mehta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 11:05 PM
I'm getting off here an hour late. BROTHER!! Anyway, biblical means from the bible. That poem you liked of mine, is using English the way it appears in the Bible(well I hope I did it right) goodnight now. See ya tomorrow, Kash!
Brown Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Kasinath. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 1:07 AM
wow! , Truly Enjoyed reading your words tonight. Thank you for sharing your poem, have your self blessed day,..LINDA
Horne Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:31 PM
LOL Many congrats on your wins, Kash : )
Brown Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Congrats Kash on your winning poem in Tyburn contest.. nice choice of words luv..
Song Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Kash, Are u thinking what I am thinking? lol. Format is perrrrrrrfect! I am so proud of u for mastering this form, Kash. Thanks for your Soup-er Support! My daughter Mika enjoyed this write also. Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Big congratulations on this drinking man's tyburn!! Luv, Andrea (I can really see it now!!)
Freeman Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 9:32 PM
Kashinath, Nice words choice for rhymes. Quite good, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest,kashinath
Song Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:45 PM
I stand corrected, Kash! This poem might not win bc when I read it...the.......rooom.....is.....spinning.....alll....around!!! ha ha. Wonderful. Now, follow the advice in my tyburn. Don't text and drive....then with your tyburn....don't drink and write!!! ha ha. Bye Bud!
Neels Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 2:49 PM
hehe, watch out now.. Don't get too tipsy ;) enjoyed this Kash, good luck for Dr. Ram's contest ;) Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Yes, I've had nights like this, Kash! Great tyburn for Dr. Ram's contest. Soup mail coming. Love, Carolyn
Wesley Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Are you headed to the bathroom Kashi? Hope you made it my dear. Love the verse, it takes me there too! Love, Elizabeth
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 12:07 AM
more than a few nights like this Kash.. excellent choices for your entry luv.. good luck.. do u know my husband? haha..sounds a lot like Ron.. oh ..only kidding..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Just seeing this one again, it's so cute.
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Interesting one..Leaves one with questions..Enjoyed reading this morning..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my simple work..I enjoyed writing that one...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 11:22 PM
Hey, Kash, this is nice. Are you describing your own child here? They can sure be this way!! Hey, did you notice they are now getting rid of our past poetry? ONly the last 200 can be found. It makes me annoyed because many poets here, I have read their last 200 poems and I enjoyed going way back in their pages to see poems to comment on!!
Mehta Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Thanks for the entry, kashinath
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Kash, You write in form poetry so well. Thank you for your comments. (Soupmail)
Onclaud Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 6:34 PM
really child-like with descriptive artwrids, kashi... winning wishes! :) huggs
Song Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 5:38 PM
Hi Kash.....reading,,,,liking.....this tyburn of yours! Nice job. What a unique form for a lot of us. When are u gonna sponsor your first contest? Gwendolen
Sumler Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 3:55 PM
Beautiful title with a wonderful approach to this classic form. A great entry k.k.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace