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Tipsy Turvy Nights

Toddling stumbling fumbling tumbling are some nights,like toddling stumbling child, tipsy turvy fumbling tumbling mind. © kashinath karmakar(17th August 2011) ===============000============== Placement:7th;(August 2011) Contest:Tyburn Sponsor:Dr.Ram Mehta

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2011 11:05:00 PM

I'm getting off here an hour late. BROTHER!! Anyway, biblical means from the bible. That poem you liked of mine, is using English the way it appears in the Bible(well I hope I did it right) goodnight now. See ya tomorrow, Kash!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 9:06:00 AM

Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Kasinath. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2011 1:07:00 AM

wow! , Truly Enjoyed reading your words tonight. Thank you for sharing your poem, have your self blessed day,..LINDA

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2011 4:31:00 PM

LOL Many congrats on your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/26/2011 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2011 11:28:00 PM

Congrats Kash on your winning poem in Tyburn contest.. nice choice of words luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/25/2011 11:15:00 PM

Kash, Are u thinking what I am thinking? lol. Format is perrrrrrrfect! I am so proud of u for mastering this form, Kash. Thanks for your Soup-er Support! My daughter Mika enjoyed this write also. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2011 11:15:00 PM

Big congratulations on this drinking man's tyburn!! Luv, Andrea (I can really see it now!!)

John Freeman

Date: 8/25/2011 9:32:00 PM

Kashinath, Nice words choice for rhymes. Quite good, a worthy poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2011 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest,kashinath

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/19/2011 10:45:00 PM

I stand corrected, Kash! This poem might not win bc when I read it...the.......rooom.....is.....spinning.....alll....around!!! ha ha. Wonderful. Now, follow the advice in my tyburn. Don't text and drive....then with your tyburn....don't drink and write!!! ha ha. Bye Bud!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/19/2011 2:49:00 PM

hehe, watch out now.. Don't get too tipsy ;) enjoyed this Kash, good luck for Dr. Ram's contest ;) Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/19/2011 2:33:00 PM

Yes, I've had nights like this, Kash! Great tyburn for Dr. Ram's contest. Soup mail coming. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/19/2011 1:58:00 PM

Are you headed to the bathroom Kashi? Hope you made it my dear. Love the verse, it takes me there too! Love, Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/19/2011 12:07:00 AM

more than a few nights like this Kash.. excellent choices for your entry luv.. good luck.. do u know my husband? haha..sounds a lot like Ron.. oh ..only kidding..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2011 10:21:00 PM

Just seeing this one again, it's so cute.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2011 8:37:00 AM

Interesting one..Leaves one with questions..Enjoyed reading this morning..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading and commenting on my simple work..I enjoyed writing that one...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2011 11:22:00 PM

Hey, Kash, this is nice. Are you describing your own child here? They can sure be this way!! Hey, did you notice they are now getting rid of our past poetry? ONly the last 200 can be found. It makes me annoyed because many poets here, I have read their last 200 poems and I enjoyed going way back in their pages to see poems to comment on!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/17/2011 8:25:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, kashinath

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2011 6:46:00 PM

Kash, You write in form poetry so well. Thank you for your comments. (Soupmail)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/17/2011 6:34:00 PM

really child-like with descriptive artwrids, kashi... winning wishes! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/17/2011 5:38:00 PM

Hi Kash.....reading,,,,liking.....this tyburn of yours! Nice job. What a unique form for a lot of us. When are u gonna sponsor your first contest? Gwendolen

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/17/2011 3:55:00 PM

Beautiful title with a wonderful approach to this classic form. A great entry k.k.