Tip-Pit

TIP-PIT

Tip pit life is full of strife, 
He took a knife and killed his wife,
He was weak so he couldn’t speak.
He ran to his house and took a stick of milk,
 but it was full of ink.
He ran and checked his time, 
but unfortunately it was nine,
And he had lost the fine 
he payed to get the line.
He drank some wine 
from the dine for it was mine.
Tears dropped from his eyes, 
for he was in fear that 
the neighbors will hear.
Tip pit is a nit,  
for he lit up his house with his fit.
The neighbors flew into rage 
and had him caged. 
Tip pit lost his happiness,
For he was now living 
In a cage filled with darkness.
Oh, how sad is Tip pit, 
for he has lost the tranquility he dreams of, 
Now he lives in a pit filled with ****.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 8, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Lol...love it
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January 10, 2016 at 3:36 PM
wow,,, that was a very raw read.. SKAT
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