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Tip of Your Nose

I knew that for me it was you 
that day I first spied your brown eyes, 
and my gray adamantine skies 
got all sparkly and soft and blue.  

I proposed the tip of your nose, 
with its little mounds and its dips, 
(it's the key to unlock your lips.)  
for where my very first kiss goes.  

I caught you alone as you paused 
one moment too long.  It landed 
with you off guard, as I planned it; 
but, wow! the wild heart beats that caused.  

My eyes weren’t closed and rolled 
they did when yours went big as plates.  
My head whipped back; that relates 
to how hard was your nose and cold.  

I knew right away my ‘amore’ 
wouldn't rate romance in your dreams.  
“I’m sorry," I said, "It seems…”  
But then you whispered, “Kiss me more.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 8:51 PM
ooo Lala!! really nice and you are almost to ballad meter 8/6/8/6 ;) why not try one for my new contest..Creepy Irish Critters [something fun for up coming halloween!] thanks for you nice comment on my write! light & love
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 8:10 AM
I really like your writing and enjoy reading it. E.J.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:39 AM
hmmm, it means like a diamond, so your skies just finally took the gleam they were meant to have!
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 1:32 PM
I liked your moon poem, and I'm sorry about your magic moonlight moment. I'm sure, play your cards right and you will. There's too much romance in your poems.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:38 AM
HOw cute, and much more "real" than my goofy moon poem!! I never saw the word adamantine before. will have to look it up. Sounds like a cool word.
T Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 8:20 AM
Great imagery and feeling produced by this poem, thanks for sharing.
Horne Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Lovely tender write : )
Sathyanarayana Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 8:05 AM
wow! So romantic..the imagery is novel.Thanks for sharing.
Baity Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Wow!!! This is romantic John..Really a pleasure to read... a fav.......beautiful poetry!!!!!
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Ms Baity. I'd like to write heart pound poems like yours. Write us some more.
Smith Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 8:03 AM
There are parts that are just so 'you' that we have to.
Culverhouse Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 10:18 PM
Hey John, it is funny how men think....you know where my hubbie wanted to kiss me....my eye lids. It seemed strange to me. I did not mind though.;} {^~^}
Cooke Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 5:40 PM
romance still lives i love this encounter, lovely write and good poetry
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