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Tiny Vampire

The world's number one killer I wonder why it hasn't yet made its way Into a horror movie thriller Why, though it could beat Even the serial killer! Oh it gets even past locked doors Through the tiniest of holes and pores And however tiny It bodes fatality For to many its bites Have been lethal, fatal And it sings freely in your ears But like a teeny weeny vampire Don't you undermine the miniscule, the minute For tis a real-life miniature vampire Tis a blood sucking brute! And they come in hordes Without guns or swords This major yet tiny killer of humans Though you might kill with a flick of your hands Yet you could never wipe out the whole band From the face of the earth What with its prolific birth! As this is one flying army here to stay And by hook or by crook In each and every nook It shall share our land! How terrible that our blood is on its main menu My and your blood its main staple diet So I warn you fellow humans Save yourselves from the anopheles's bite. Call it mosquito or agent of malaria Plasmodiums are far worse than any bacteria And they aren't just doing their job They're doing their bloody feeding We ain't in paradise yet: thus both the harmful and harmless are breeding!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/26/2014 5:35:00 AM
Very extraordinary poem of tiny vampire beautifully pictured. Loved always,my poet friend, bl
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:18:00 AM
HI REALLY I LOVED YOUR POEM. IT WAS JUST AWESOME POEM ABOUT VAMPIRE.YOUR VAMPIRE WILL BE SOON IN THE MOVIES AS YOU WISH
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Date: 12/9/2013 10:31:00 AM
Never have I read a better verse about a mosquito... than this one... It was a captivating read.
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:20:00 PM
thought provoking indeed : )
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Date: 11/24/2013 8:55:00 AM
Ooh- ooh, scary bugs for sure. Lovely take on the vampire contest, Zaynub. This is good poetry, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/22/2013 10:54:00 AM
Nice piece caught my attention with the title.
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Date: 11/20/2013 11:21:00 AM
You mold it through with an incredible art i this am falling in love with your poetic art
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Date: 11/18/2013 10:05:00 PM
Excellent. Very creative and interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:10:00 PM
I agree with Andrea, this was a creative and unique take on the vampire theme! Very interesting, and well written!...Thank you so much for the great comments. I really appreciate it, my friend!
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Date: 11/18/2013 4:15:00 PM
this was a great twist on the topic of vampires. You took it to a whole different place with it being mosquitos! I think it would be scary to get malaria!!
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Date: 11/18/2013 8:52:00 AM
THANKS FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR POEM A LOT WELL DONE
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Date: 11/17/2013 3:25:00 PM
This is very cool and eco-true loved it alot my friend and thank you so much for your comments on my typhoon.cheri
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