Tiny Treasure

While preparing for the yard sale…there it was…
Just as tiny as I cautiously recalled
It is your hospital bracelet…
Amongst the many papers sprawled

Momentarily, I remembered seeing your tiny toes…tiny nose…
I pictured your precious little face…
I recalled how much your angelic demeanor 
and innocent charm led my thoughts to race

I often think about you still today
I wonder what lied ahead
What had become of your precious little self…
Did you have children and wed?

Forever doubting but knowing
I had made the right decision
Fully certain still today
With selfless, caring precision

I wonder if you ever thought of me…
Wondered what I was like
I wondered if you knew how much you meant to me…
Or were you purely full of spite?

Soon, I am leaving this world…
And as for me, you will never know
You will not know my true unselfishness…
Since I have no more candles left to blow

I will always treasure you…my love
I will always value the very few moments we had
I will always keep you close to my heart
So there is no reason to be sad

So please, my true prize, my little one …
All doubts, please cast aside
For my tiny little treasure …your bracelet…
Will forever be at my side


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Note: Please note that I wrote this in first person just to add drama to the story.  
This is 100% fictional and not based on my life.  I hope I did the subject justice.
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****Written for Paula Swanson's Yard Sale Contest*****
Won 1st Place!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/1/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Natalie on your well deserved featured poem this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:34:00 PM
I was starting to worry at the last bit! Beautifully worded, loving poem. A delight to read :)
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:58:00 PM
revisiting this cute one, and I hope to see a lot of new poems from you! Luv,Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2011 8:29:00 PM
well, how cool. I see you still won the contest despite it being fictional. Way to go. A wonderful idea you came up with for the contest!
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Natalie in Paula's "Yard Sale" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:00:00 AM
Wow-Thank you Paula and everyone for your very kind comments. I am very surprised and humbled :) Happy 4th to all-Love, Natalie
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:11:00 AM
well-deserved top win, natalie... sweet cheers to you! :) huggs
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:33:00 AM
an absoloute worthy winner, congratulations. a beautiful write
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Date: 7/3/2011 5:30:00 AM
And did the subject justice you did, Natalie. Congrats to you on the big win
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:37:00 PM
vivid emotions, real understanding, a lovely poem...well done...Syd
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:48:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic piece, Natalie. Awesome. Proud to share 1st Place with you. Have a great Fourth. Best to you and yours. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a mravelous win in this exciting contest. Job well done. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:24:00 PM
Congrats Natalie on your first place win with this touching entry luv.. happy 4th luv..
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:01:00 PM
A lovely verse Natalie, you put meaning and light into this poem.
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:24:00 PM
wow! this brought many memories, and i hold all 6 of my tiny treasure bracelest. I love this poem, and it has very special meaning. I did have to part with one, but the bracelet is there to remind me of 10 little toes & 10 little fingers.. what a dreamy thought of forever.. thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 6/10/2011 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Y Destroyer, for the very nice comment-that made my day. I'm really new at this, so I appreciate the kind words.
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