Poet Destroyer A Poet Quatrain

Tiny Thought

T I N Y    T H O U G H T  


I wonder if
over the cliff
was it hard 
reviling the card

it never was
usually does
look my way
make it go away

don't want to do
hurt you
reasons gone
we don't belong

I better run
stick around for fun
open mind
color blind

our time
is now doing the crime
should I 
or shouldn't I

stick around
you won't frown
play my tricks
love can't  be fix

perfect never
maybe clever
hear me out
leave you in doubt 

my soul will not comply
holding back the tears
today passes 6 years

handled  what I got
something that was not
giving my best shot
to a tiny thought

(p.d.)

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Cynthia Jones April 13, 2015 at 1:43 PM Linda, this is a clever write. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich July 5, 2014 at 1:34 AM seeing this one again and thinking maybe you could narrow it to five stanzas and use it in that one quatrain contest. she did want short lines! PD, is it just me? I have noticed lately that I am writing many comments but getting only half the replies I used to get. It's so discouraging. i feel like I am working my ass off with comments and my poems just sit there as if not being read! I am getting plenty of congrats comments, but I am wishing more people would read my new poetry. It's insane!

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2013 at 10:19 AM awesome I'm featured ... LOL...this was only a witty write... ME

Gordon Mcconnell October 5, 2013 at 3:05 AM Great write Linda, really enjoyed this as its so cleverly done. have blessed day, Gordon

Juli- Michelle October 3, 2013 at 2:11 PM Congratulations on your feature!!!! A wonderful read Love, Juli-Michelle

Kechi Odibi October 3, 2013 at 11:54 AM Beautiful one. So insightful

Ivy Vresk October 2, 2013 at 7:40 PM congrats on your poem being featured,Very nice poem,thank you for sharing,Ivy

Sandra Adams October 2, 2013 at 6:48 PM love the way you penned this one, made me ponder a few thoughts of my own... congrats on having this poem featured :)

Vince Suzadail Jr. October 2, 2013 at 5:09 PM Congrats on the feature, PD. Some tiny thoughts can be mind boggling.

Daver Austin September 30, 2013 at 9:16 AM Tiny thoughts can be mind-giants, eh? Congrats on the selection. LOve, daver

Carrie Richards September 30, 2013 at 9:02 AM Congrats on this poem being featured this week, PD !!

Robin Davis September 24, 2013 at 7:48 AM This is different and unique. Clever and creative. Nice job

Harry Horsman December 14, 2012 at 2:26 PM clever poem, and clever poet

Justin Bordner September 6, 2012 at 6:43 PM tiny thoughts keep us alive PD. - tiny thought grow,grow big,into good or bad,into pleasure or pain,into life or death - J.A.B. %

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2012 at 8:43 PM soupmail. PD.

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2011 at 3:05 PM Here is another one I have responded to, even way back here. But I wanted to tell you hello, it's so fun to see you here today. About that collaboration I just commented on. Your part was SO much better, but I didn't say that underneath that poem.Let me know if you can think of any poems of yours I have not seen. Gotta move fast and see other comments before the hubbie gets home from having the truck fixed. Yes, Soup was BAD these past few days. It was actually good. I could take a breather. ha!

Wilma Neels August 4, 2010 at 6:57 AM Lots said for a tiny thought, really enjoyed this, this afternoon.. tc Wilma

Ravindra K Kapoor June 10, 2010 at 8:15 AM Your tiny thought is amazingly wonderful, making us realize how sometimes even a tiny thought can be so grave & pinching. Excellent write my friend. Thanks for valued comments on 'I am sad today'. I feel that you are going through sadness, when we want our feelings to be shared. If you need to share any of your feelings you can write to me either through soup mail or on my direct mail. Just be strong as you are in your Poetry & everything would be fine. Love and best wishes.. Ravindra...Poet D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 4, 2010 at 12:27 AM You sure got me thinking again with your tiny thought--enjoyed reading your poetry yet again :) & haha yay soup's back online --nikko :)

Daniel Cwiak May 26, 2010 at 10:08 AM This is just what happens when one dwells on a tiny thought...great writing and good rhythm to their words. Just wonderful, as it gave me some "tiny thoughts" to think about. Regards, Dan C

Lynette Chachere May 25, 2010 at 8:09 PM lol."creating a picture"? i will just take that as another mystery P.D. is putting together yet to come. haha, it'd would be crazy if you posted an actual picture! yeah right.lol anyway.no i didn't see it there, sounds like a wait to read though!for a back to back slam party. can't wait for your new post of entertainment tomorrow then, woo hoo! slammin friend. -Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2010 at 10:07 AM Back to this poem with no new one to see. (do a Pablo Neruda for us!) P.D. I researched him before doing that poem. I could not do it simply from seeing a picture. I think when I took spanish Lit eons ago, I probably read a bit of his work. He is acclaimed as South America's best, so I think he is a poet worthy to be studied by us! Thanks for reading my poem today. LUv, Andrea

Royal Trevino May 17, 2010 at 10:13 PM ryhming is awesome, you sure now how to put a good write together, Royal

Gerard Keogh Jr. May 13, 2010 at 8:08 AM I really like: "perfect never... That is a standout segment. Concise and memorable. I like your approach in this format. Regards, and thanks, Gerard

Jay Loveless May 11, 2010 at 10:11 AM i really like this

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