Jan Allison Poet Tritina

Tiny Little Baby

You were fragile and so tiny
Can’t believe you were so little
My perfect son my own baby

Lying in safe arms my baby
Fingers and toes are so tiny
Doll like clothing is so little
     
Next to daddy you are little
Just a premature new baby
Why were you born very tiny

Your fingernails are so tiny
Simple perfection but little
Mummy devoted to baby    

Gorgeous tiny little baby  

08~01~14

Written for Tritina Challenge Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Daver Austin August 2, 2014 at 11:10 AM Methinks this tender piece would make a good lullaby. Good to hear from you and thanks for dropping by. LOve, daver Jan Allison August 2, 2014 at 11:35 AM That is a lovely thought Daver thank you:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2014 at 5:21 AM Lovely write Jan! motherly sublime feelings,, so pure,, loved much,, good luck to you! Jan Allison August 2, 2014 at 5:23 AM Thank you so much for your lovely comment Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 1, 2014 at 7:07 PM Beautiful! well done, I am having formating issues too! grrr. but your poem is beautiful my dear, many hugs :) Jan Allison August 1, 2014 at 7:10 PM Thanks Casarah it seems a lot of us are suffering but it is SO frustrating as up until today I could reformat the poem but now it just wont work - ggr grrr and double grrrr. hugs jan xxxx

Paul Callus August 1, 2014 at 6:20 PM This makes for a lovely entry in Craig's contest, Jan. Can imagine your tiny baby, a bundle of joy:) /x/ paul ..... [re formatting...have you tried clearing the computer browsing history? or else use CCleaner.] Jan Allison August 1, 2014 at 6:24 PM There is a bit of 'poetic licence' here Paul as he wasn't premature - I found it a real challenge to try this form for the first time. I've had this problem with formatting for about 2 weeks and always been able to reformat straight away with no problem , but today I can't reformat at all.... guess they must be working on it LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 1, 2014 at 6:11 PM The formatting is only a tiny problem compared with this fabulous Tritina...Love it... No greater love than a mother for her child...hugs Tim Jan Allison August 1, 2014 at 6:16 PM Oh Tim that comment has made my day - its my first attempt and I found it SUCH a hard challenge. Hugs as ever Jan xxx