Shanity Rain Poet Diamante

Tiny Dancer

Ballerina
                         soft pink
                dancing, acting, performing
            Artist, musician, poetess, magician
              entrancing, captivating, giving
                       tiny dancer
                     Granddaughter

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Poet Destroyer A November 24, 2013 at 1:41 PM soup mail in less than 5 minutes Shanity Rain November 27, 2013 at 2:56 PM Sweety , I have not been responding very much at all to the soup mail. I do apologize , if I am not responsive to anyone's mail , at this point ~ Love and warmth to you .

Poet Destroyer A November 20, 2013 at 8:03 PM Shannity, , Congratulations on your Diamente~ xox~ LINDA Shanity Rain November 27, 2013 at 2:54 PM Thank-you Darling ,

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 16, 2013 at 3:10 PM Love this transition from the young granddaughter to the full grown ballerina, Shanity, congratulations on your win. Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 4:57 PM Thank-you ! Every time it is read , I feel I am honoring "Trinity "

Sara Kendrick November 15, 2013 at 1:23 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 4:58 PM Thank-you Sara, I am soon reading the Contest I sponsored , realizing it is quite a responsibility !

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2013 at 3:19 AM very delicately done!.. sweet winning cheers to you, shanity!..:) huggs Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 5:01 PM Thanks Nette ! I love that name !!

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2013 at 11:48 PM this one is pure sweetness. Congrats to you, Shanity. Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 5:02 PM Thank-you Andrea, I love the simple ness of this ! New style for me as well .

Sandra Adams November 14, 2013 at 7:35 PM I could picture her there...my daughter was a little ballerina at a young age... you did a great job with this form...congrats on your win :) Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 5:04 PM Thank-you Sandra , I can see her now !

Carrie Richards November 14, 2013 at 2:38 PM Hi Shanity......I have a granddaughter who is also a tiny, captivating ballerina.....so I could identify with this topic......so sweet!!! Shanity Rain November 17, 2013 at 5:03 PM Yes , we are dance Moms ! and dance grand moms !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 14, 2013 at 5:10 AM more congratulations on another win Shanity well done xx Shanity Rain November 14, 2013 at 11:06 AM Thank-you sweet girl ! Love to you , SR.

Dr.Ram Mehta November 13, 2013 at 10:23 PM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Shanity Shanity Rain November 14, 2013 at 11:08 AM Thank-you Dr. I have been inspired by your contest from the start , for you have pushed me into different forms of poetry , so there fore you are a Teacher , as well as a Doctor ~ Honored :) Shanity Rain.

Jay Loveless November 13, 2013 at 3:54 PM Simple and beautiful :) Shanity Rain November 14, 2013 at 11:09 AM Thank-you beautiful Lady ! It is about my Granddaughter "Trinity Faith " perfect form , for she is a Diamond !

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper November 2, 2013 at 1:03 PM The tiny dancer so fluid in her motion causing us all to stop and wonder at the emotion in her movements...Very nice! Granddaughter...you...nope, not buying it! nice try though! MC Shanity Rain November 14, 2013 at 11:11 AM Well , My Grand daughter , yes! Trinity faith ~ she is as beautiful as I write and more, I had a dream about her before she was born , a white light surrounds her and Mom ~ Thanks , SR.

Monterey Sirak October 26, 2013 at 8:20 AM Your words are magical and lyrical. Shanity Rain October 26, 2013 at 10:44 AM you are absolutely adorable ! you are a sweet friend , one in my life. I would love to have coffee with . I have a book that needs the final review , Then I can give more time, your comments are giving me warmth and love ..thank-you so much ! My New friend forever !

Dr.Ram Mehta October 25, 2013 at 10:33 PM Thanks for the entry, Shanity Shanity Rain October 26, 2013 at 3:07 AM Thank-you Doctor for the inspiration ! you always challenge me to write a different style !