Tiny Dancer

Ballerina
                         soft pink
                dancing, acting, performing
            Artist, musician, poetess, magician
              entrancing, captivating, giving
                       tiny dancer
                     Granddaughter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/24/2013 1:41:00 PM
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Shanity Rain
Date: 11/27/2013 2:56:00 PM
Sweety , I have not been responding very much at all to the soup mail. I do apologize , if I am not responsive to anyone's mail , at this point ~ Love and warmth to you .
Date: 11/20/2013 8:03:00 PM
Shannity, , Congratulations on your Diamente~ xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:54:00 PM
Thank-you Darling ,
Date: 11/16/2013 3:10:00 PM
Love this transition from the young granddaughter to the full grown ballerina, Shanity, congratulations on your win.
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Shanity Rain
Date: 11/17/2013 4:57:00 PM
Thank-you ! Every time it is read , I feel I am honoring "Trinity "
Date: 11/15/2013 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 11/17/2013 4:58:00 PM
Thank-you Sara, I am soon reading the Contest I sponsored , realizing it is quite a responsibility !
Date: 11/15/2013 3:19:00 AM
very delicately done!.. sweet winning cheers to you, shanity!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Nette ! I love that name !!
Date: 11/14/2013 11:48:00 PM
this one is pure sweetness. Congrats to you, Shanity.
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Shanity Rain
Date: 11/17/2013 5:02:00 PM
Thank-you Andrea, I love the simple ness of this ! New style for me as well .
Date: 11/14/2013 7:35:00 PM
I could picture her there...my daughter was a little ballerina at a young age... you did a great job with this form...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:04:00 PM
Thank-you Sandra , I can see her now !
Date: 11/14/2013 2:38:00 PM
Hi Shanity......I have a granddaughter who is also a tiny, captivating ballerina.....so I could identify with this topic......so sweet!!!
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Shanity Rain
Date: 11/17/2013 5:03:00 PM
Yes , we are dance Moms ! and dance grand moms !
Date: 11/14/2013 5:10:00 AM
more congratulations on another win Shanity well done xx
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Shanity Rain
Date: 11/14/2013 11:06:00 AM
Thank-you sweet girl ! Love to you , SR.
Date: 11/13/2013 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating, Shanity
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:08:00 AM
Thank-you Dr. I have been inspired by your contest from the start , for you have pushed me into different forms of poetry , so there fore you are a Teacher , as well as a Doctor ~ Honored :) Shanity Rain.
Date: 11/13/2013 3:54:00 PM
Simple and beautiful :)
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:09:00 AM
Thank-you beautiful Lady ! It is about my Granddaughter "Trinity Faith " perfect form , for she is a Diamond !
Date: 11/2/2013 1:03:00 PM
The tiny dancer so fluid in her motion causing us all to stop and wonder at the emotion in her movements...Very nice! Granddaughter...you...nope, not buying it! nice try though! MC
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Date: 11/14/2013 11:11:00 AM
Well , My Grand daughter , yes! Trinity faith ~ she is as beautiful as I write and more, I had a dream about her before she was born , a white light surrounds her and Mom ~ Thanks , SR.
Date: 10/26/2013 8:20:00 AM
Your words are magical and lyrical.
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Date: 10/26/2013 10:44:00 AM
you are absolutely adorable ! you are a sweet friend , one in my life. I would love to have coffee with . I have a book that needs the final review , Then I can give more time, your comments are giving me warmth and love ..thank-you so much ! My New friend forever !
Date: 10/25/2013 10:33:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Shanity
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Shanity Rain
Date: 10/26/2013 3:07:00 AM
Thank-you Doctor for the inspiration ! you always challenge me to write a different style !
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