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Tints of Luster

Amber skyline
Drapes midnight’s ceiling

Tints of luster fade
Airbrushed with mist

Wafts gently twirl 
In a slow dance
To warm earth’s repose


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Shanzi for Joann Grisetti
by nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2012

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Kash Poet Date: 6/28/2012 1:30:00 PM Wow!!!!! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/28/2012 12:31:00 PM It has been removed from my list of Contest entries too, I checked..but I didn't remove it. Who knows do not worry nette all is fine. Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 6/28/2012 6:26:00 AM Cute and cool..love it, ..:) Jag Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/28/2012 5:23:00 AM I did not remove Church, Steeple, People from your contest nette I do not know what happened? Light & Love Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 6/27/2012 5:42:00 PM good luck in the contest' Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/27/2012 5:26:00 PM Nette, God luck in the contest...pd Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/27/2012 3:28:00 PM Ahh....so lovely, as if a painting in pastels!!! ....ps...soupmail to Nette!! Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 6/27/2012 3:18:00 PM Wonderfully crafted! Lovely wording and gentle yet lustrous images. Good luck in the contest!! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/27/2012 2:34:00 PM Winning material for sure..Good luck in the contest..Your contest entry describes the night sky so well...I have a bruise on my finger that I operate the mouse for my computer..The bruise is vertical and in the exact spot that the mouse button goes..I have no idea how I got it..I must be using the mouse button too much..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/27/2012 12:22:00 PM A stunning piece Nette and you make this new form look so easy with this beauty.. All the best for the contest :) hugs Wilma Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 6/27/2012 11:23:00 AM Wow, what graphical display of scenery here Nette! The feeling I get from this write is grandiose and awe inspiring my friend! I love the slow dance at which you describe, I entertain that in my mind and I enjoy the light! You always keep me in the minds eye of my imagination! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/27/2012 9:55:00 AM just love this beautiful write, Nette Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/26/2012 11:46:00 PM Beautiful Nette....earley morning here....the sun just come up in a slow colorful dance. - Have a lovely day to you. - hugggs from me to you. :) - Anne-Lise Login to Reply