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Tints of Luster

Amber skyline Drapes midnight’s ceiling Tints of luster fade Airbrushed with mist Wafts gently twirl In a slow dance To warm earth’s repose © Shanzi for Joann Grisetti by nette onclaud

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Kash Poet

Date: 6/28/2012 1:30:00 PM

Wow!!!!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/28/2012 12:31:00 PM

It has been removed from my list of Contest entries too, I checked..but I didn't remove it. Who knows do not worry nette all is fine.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/28/2012 6:26:00 AM

Cute and cool..love it, ..:) Jag

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/28/2012 5:23:00 AM

I did not remove Church, Steeple, People from your contest nette I do not know what happened? Light & Love

Nathan D.

Date: 6/27/2012 5:42:00 PM

good luck in the contest'

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 5:26:00 PM

Nette, God luck in the contest...pd

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2012 3:28:00 PM

Ahh....so lovely, as if a painting in pastels!!! ....ps...soupmail to Nette!!

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/27/2012 3:18:00 PM

Wonderfully crafted! Lovely wording and gentle yet lustrous images. Good luck in the contest!! Best wishes, Keith

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2012 2:34:00 PM

Winning material for sure..Good luck in the contest..Your contest entry describes the night sky so well...I have a bruise on my finger that I operate the mouse for my computer..The bruise is vertical and in the exact spot that the mouse button goes..I have no idea how I got it..I must be using the mouse button too much..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2012 12:22:00 PM

A stunning piece Nette and you make this new form look so easy with this beauty.. All the best for the contest :) hugs Wilma

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/27/2012 11:23:00 AM

Wow, what graphical display of scenery here Nette! The feeling I get from this write is grandiose and awe inspiring my friend! I love the slow dance at which you describe, I entertain that in my mind and I enjoy the light! You always keep me in the minds eye of my imagination! Great Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/27/2012 9:55:00 AM

just love this beautiful write, Nette

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2012 11:46:00 PM

Beautiful Nette....earley morning here....the sun just come up in a slow colorful dance. - Have a lovely day to you. - hugggs from me to you. :) - Anne-Lise