Tints of Luster

Amber skyline
Drapes midnight’s ceiling

Tints of luster fade
Airbrushed with mist

Wafts gently twirl 
In a slow dance
To warm earth’s repose


           ©



Shanzi for Joann Grisetti
by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 28, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Wow!!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 12:31 PM
It has been removed from my list of Contest entries too, I checked..but I didn't remove it. Who knows do not worry nette all is fine.
Nair Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Cute and cool..love it, ..:) Jag
Guzzi Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 5:23 AM
I did not remove Church, Steeple, People from your contest nette I do not know what happened? Light & Love
D. Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 5:42 PM
good luck in the contest'
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June 27, 2012 at 5:26 PM
Nette, God luck in the contest...pd
Richards Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 3:28 PM
Ahh....so lovely, as if a painting in pastels!!! ....ps...soupmail to Nette!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Wonderfully crafted! Lovely wording and gentle yet lustrous images. Good luck in the contest!! Best wishes, Keith
Kendrick Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 2:34 PM
Winning material for sure..Good luck in the contest..Your contest entry describes the night sky so well...I have a bruise on my finger that I operate the mouse for my computer..The bruise is vertical and in the exact spot that the mouse button goes..I have no idea how I got it..I must be using the mouse button too much..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Neels Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:22 PM
A stunning piece Nette and you make this new form look so easy with this beauty.. All the best for the contest :) hugs Wilma
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June 27, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Wow, what graphical display of scenery here Nette! The feeling I get from this write is grandiose and awe inspiring my friend! I love the slow dance at which you describe, I entertain that in my mind and I enjoy the light! You always keep me in the minds eye of my imagination! Great Work!!
Horne Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:55 AM
just love this beautiful write, Nette
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 11:46 PM
Beautiful Nette....earley morning here....the sun just come up in a slow colorful dance. - Have a lovely day to you. - hugggs from me to you. :) - Anne-Lise
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