Tinted Shores

```` ```` ` merry-go-round twigs wiggling down rows of grasses… summer petticoats charcoal sands boling Monet grass wears red-tanned shades… bubbled tints on shore (c) double haiku `````````` for Briand's Any Theme/Form from nette onclaud
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Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 9:43 AM
congrats Nette luv on brilliant first place win luv.. awesome as always..
Zakerski Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 3:27 AM
congratulations!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 2:46 AM
Congratulations nette.xx
Pettit Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:42 PM
Two very nice haiku poems. Congratulations on winning with these.
Quigley Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 9:15 PM
Congrats Nette
Scholtz Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Lovely Haiku Nette, Congratulations on your win Elizabeth
Crisci Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your big win, sweet Nette! Your imagery goes far beyond those poetic thoughts on Tinted Shores...immensely awesome and delightful. Thank you for your kind comments. God bless. Love and hugs, Andrew.
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Fascinating imagery. sweetie. Congrats on that awesome high placement.
Song Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Awesome images in this doublet haiku...charcoal sands boiling and bubbled tints on shore is truly a great poetic picture...how'd ya do that AGAIN. Thanks for the report card yesterday too..u are a strict lil professor....and inspiring..still sipping on champagne in Paris in my poetry mind..it's too soon to retreat to your bubbly shore..lol. Gwendolen
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January 16, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Love the double Haiku !!! Congrats my dear Nette!!!! Love Michael
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Form/Theme" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 10:41 AM
Nette congrats on your win, liked it..David
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January 16, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Congrats on your win, my friend, bl
R Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 1:35 AM
the imagery is amazing. congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:27 PM
I really enjoyed this one, Nette. WAY TO GO. LUcky you, summer coming and we are still in winter!
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:08 PM
colourful haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, nette
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Wonderful imagery here!Congrats nette on your 1st place win!---kashinath
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Hello Nette, This is just wonderful! Such imagination and so full of light and love Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:49 AM
It's great to see you at the top, Nette with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Congrats Nette my friend on your first place win in Carol's contest with this excellent expressive entry luv... your words capture the imagination .. kudos on your top spot for a top notch poem ...
Mannan Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Jasmine weeds wear sun-tanned shades Wow.Many congratulations for this win.
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Really loved the last one especially you have the emotional content part down most excellently! Congrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Nette. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
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