Tinsel Town

tinsel town

late at night
early in the morning 
after all of the glitter has fallen
dripping down the worn facades
scenes worn into pretences
of water colour puddles
like gasoline rainbows on wet streets
soon, mere ghost echoes
absorbed into walls and walkways
wanders off directionless
without mouths

egos rise from the leftovers
bleak bland dawn walkers
trod the ashen border of day
afraid of the light yet drawn
to the promise of warmth 
real human heat 
from working hearts


vampires of counterfeit existence
covet the sun
but turn before melting
lost once again 
in their imitation of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Fleming Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 2:42 PM
I could not agree more than with George's excellent comments - gripping imagery indeed! Your ability to express what you see around you in such a highly descriptive way is most commendable, Patricia -- it is one of the many things that makes your poems so compelling! :) john P.s Hope you are warm and secure tonight... and enjoying your poetry. :)
Cresswell Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 5:57 PM
All tucked up for the blow. Thank you for your encouragement.
One Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Great story telling..
Cresswell Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:43 AM
I am happy that you like my stories. That is a great compliment. I am showing you inside me and you found something likeable. Thank you for telling me.
White Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 2:33 AM
WoW, you word smith, you did it again! Fantastic poem.
Cresswell Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:40 AM
I like that word 'smith' of words. I take words from a net, in which I caught them during the night and cobble them together to make an idea become visible. Thank you Darren.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Poetess you wield a formidable sword.
Cresswell Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Always at the ready to defend a friend. Thank you for your comment.
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